Thursday, October 07, 2004

The haiku structure, as far as I recall, is a 3 line poem with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the third. It's supposed to be about nature somehow, you know, mountains, the river, etc. But I think it is ok to take poetic license literally in these cases.

five syllables now,
seven and then five again
bad flippin' haiku.

be good.

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